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The continuous water movement on, above, and below the earth’s surface, called the water cycle is illustrated in the diagram above.

The continuous water movement on, above, and below the earth’s surface, called the water cycle is illustrated in the diagram above. ebDQV
The continuous water movement on, above, and below the earth’s surface, called the water cycle is illustrated in the diagram above. In general, the water in the ocean and on land evaporate into the air and forming clouds. After several processes occurred, the groundwater from the impervious layer of land come back to the ocean and wait for the next water cycle. Firstly, the body mass of water in the ocean that contributes about 80% of total water vapour in the air evaporates because of the sun’s heat and condenses at a particular height into clouds. Subsequently, because of air pressure, the clouds are moving to the area above the land. After the clouds piled up and got saturated, the process of precipitation happened, causing the water in the clouds to pouring down to earth in the form of rain. Afterwards, the rain would fall into various places on earth such as lakes, rivers, and landmasses. All of these places have their own way of flowing the water to the lower ground level. Lakes and rivers have channels to run the water while the water dropped on landmass would penetrate right into the soil and any excess water will trigger a surface runoff. Ultimately, these canals lead to the lowest ground level which is an ocean.
The continuous
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movement on, above, and below the earth’s surface, called the
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cycle
is illustrated
in the diagram above.

In general
, the
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water
in the
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ocean
and on land evaporate into the air and forming
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clouds
. After several processes occurred, the groundwater from the impervious layer of land
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come
back to the
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ocean
and wait for the
next
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cycle.

Firstly
, the body mass of
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water
in the
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ocean
that contributes about 80% of total
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water
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vapour
in the air evaporates
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because
of the sun’s heat and condenses at a particular height into
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clouds
.
Subsequently
,
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because
of air pressure, the
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clouds
are moving to the area above the land. After the
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clouds
piled up and
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got
saturated, the process of precipitation happened, causing the
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water
in the
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clouds
to pouring down to earth in the form of rain.

Afterwards, the rain would fall into various places on earth such as lakes, rivers, and landmasses. All of these places have their
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own
way of flowing the
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water
to the lower ground level. Lakes and rivers have channels to run the
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water
while the
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water
dropped on landmass would penetrate right into the soil and any excess
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will trigger a surface runoff.
Ultimately
, these canals lead to the lowest ground level which is an
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ocean
.
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IELTS academic The continuous water movement on, above, and below the earth’s surface, called the water cycle is illustrated in the diagram above.

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