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charts illustrate data regarding the various type of water and the given column graph respect the information about the consumption of water in different sectors in Egypt Saudi Arabia and Canada.

charts illustrate data regarding the various type of water and the given column graph respect the information about the consumption of water in different sectors in Egypt Saudi Arabia and Canada. VQmYJ
The given pie charts illustrate data regarding the various type of water and the given column graph respect the information about the consumption of water in different sectors in Egypt Saudi Arabia and Canada. From the first Pie Charts the freshwater only 2. 50 % amount total world water and another 97. 5 0% it Sel waters 69. 0 percentage frozen water from the total freshwater almost one-third is a fresh underground water fresh renewable water only 0. 30 percent where is underground ice is more than three time of fresh renewable water it is 0. 90 %. Most Water used by Egypt and Saudi Arabia in agriculture sector it is 40% and 50% however in Canada or most one third Water used in some sectors one-tenth Water used for domestic in Egypt and 7% for industry in same country in Saudi Arabia 7% Water used for domestic purpose whereas for industry it is used double than the domestic use of Saudi Arabia on top of Water used for industry in Canada and 18% for domestic use. overall, it can be concluded that most Water used for agriculture expect Canada and only small proportion of freshwater on the planet.
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column graph respect the information about the consumption of
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sectors in Egypt Saudi Arabia and Canada.

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2. 50 % amount total world
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and another 97. 5 0%
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it Sel
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69. 0 percentage frozen
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from the total freshwater almost one-third is a fresh underground
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fresh renewable
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0. 30 percent where is underground ice is more than three time of fresh renewable
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it is 0. 90 %.

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by Egypt and Saudi Arabia in agriculture sector it is 40% and 50%
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in Egypt and 7% for industry in same country in Saudi Arabia 7%
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of Saudi Arabia on top of
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for industry in Canada and 18% for
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for agriculture
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Canada and
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proportion of freshwater on the planet.
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IELTS academic charts illustrate data regarding the various type of water and the given column graph respect the information about the consumption of water in different sectors in Egypt Saudi Arabia and Canada.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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