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information regarding study in University of multifarious countries by the student of US UK and Australia from 2002 to next five years.

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In the given line graph display information regarding study in University of multifarious countries by the student of US UK and Australia from 2002 to next five years. from 2000 to 2007 the number of Australia student who studied in overseas countries was stable around 10, 000 the number of students who studied in Abroad was not change from 2002 to 2003. It was 30000. However, it was declined and reached at 22000 by 2007. 50000 student from the US who study in foreign university during 2002 the number was fall down till 2004 and it was 48000 by 2007 it had experience with price 15000 respectively oral it can be concluded that the number of students from US and Australia who studied abroad was unchanged in given time of period where is in the UK it was reduced.
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from 2002 to 2003. It was 30000.
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study in foreign university during 2002 the
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was fall down till 2004 and it was 48000 by 2007 it had experience with price 15000
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studied abroad
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IELTS academic information regarding study in University of multifarious countries by the student of US UK and Australia from 2002 to next five years.

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