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The graph shows The figures of visitors who stayef on a ctuise ship or s caribben island between 2019 and 2015.

The graph shows The figures of visitors who stayef on a ctuise ship or s caribben island between 2019 and 2015. 75YG5
The graph shows The figures of visitors who stayef on a ctuise ship or s caribben island between 2019 and 2015. Overall, the numbers trend has increaesed from 1 millions visitors to 3. 5 milions in 2017. In 2010 The figures illustrate that jist over 0. 5 miliobs has stayed on island while at the time just under 0. 5millions had stayed on cruse shipe. The number of visitors who staying on island have gone up by 1. 5 millions in 2013 afyerward This trend has been steedy until 2015, although it has dropped moderatly this trend revers in 2017and again reach to 1. 5 millon visitoors. The shift of line in graph of visitors who have stayed on cruise ships has climbed gradduality about 1. 5 millions from 2012 each year to reached a people at 2 millions-Although there was a considorably decreas in 2011 In coclusion It van be seem that, people tendereny have been soared dramaticly to visitors caribbian island after 2016
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