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changes to be made at university`s sports center

changes to be made at university`s sports center 9lDbW

The given diagram depicts the layout of university`s sports centre now and after its reconstruction. To embark on, there are three universities centres, where 2 are outdoor courts and the third is for indoor place their is a reception, adjacent to it their is an indoor swimming pool of length 25 metres and in the east of it their is a some sitting arrangements made for the audience and changing room for the players in the west. Their is a gym too for practise in the north of pool. However, its re-development the sports center will overlap the two outdoor centers. somethings will remains the same but some changes will be made such as the outdoor court of east will be replaced by two small dance studios in the North-East, a changing room and a cafe` towards south-east. A indoor sports hall has been designed adjacent to sitting hall, on the other hand, the west outdoor court will have a leisure pool along with a changing room towards Southern-Western direction and a small shop towards left of reception. To recapitulate, it can be clearly seen observed that number of changes will be made in future at university`s sports center, that will include more facilities for the sportsperson.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 diagram depicts the layout of The character between 'university' and 's' is an accent character, not a standard apostrophe character. Use "university’s" (curly apostrophe) or "university's" (straight apostrophe).university’suniversity's
university`s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 and after its reconstruction.

To embark on, there are three universities Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.centers
centres
, where 2 are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrustic
outdoor
 courts and the third is for indoor place Did you mean "there"?there
their
 is a reception, adjacent to it Did you mean "there"?there
their
 is an indoor swimming pool of length 25 Possible spelling mistake. 'metres' is British English.meters
metres
 and in the east of it Did you mean "there"?there
their
 is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 sitting arrangements made for the audience and changing room for the players in the west. Did you mean "there"?There
Their
 is a gym too for Possible spelling mistake. 'practise' is British English.practice
practise
 in the north of pool.

However
, its re-development the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 center will overlap the two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrustic
outdoor
 centers. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSomethings
somethings
 will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "remain"remain
remains
 the same This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 will be made
 such as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrustic
outdoor
 court of east will be replaced
 by two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 dance studios in the North-East, a changing room and a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
` towards south-east. Use "An" instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'An
A
 indoor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 hall has been designed
 adjacent to sitting hall, on the other hand
, the west You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrustic
outdoor
 court will have a leisure pool along with a changing room towards Southern-Western direction and a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 shop towards This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of reception.

To recapitulate, it can be clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 observed that number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 will be made
 in future at The character between 'university' and 's' is an accent character, not a standard apostrophe character. Use "university’s" (curly apostrophe) or "university's" (straight apostrophe).university’suniversity's
university`s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 center, that will include more facilities for the sportsperson. 