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The rendered maps here illustrate the changes made at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Initially the ratio of number of houses was high in 1990 on the contrary due to establishment of new buildings, a supermarket and a factory, the number of houses declined. To begin with, in year 1990, a number of houses can be seen towards the north of seaside along with a building at west. 2 bridges were made that connects to the railway station. A school and a hospital were made at the northern-eastern side and a parking towards the south of hospital. Furthermore, a railway staion was made at the south-east direction. On the other hand, in 2005 number of changes took place. Major proportion of area that was occupied by number of houses was replaced by number of buildings and a supermarket. An airport was established previously covered by trees and more houses were added to area around the hospital. Moreover, a new factory was made replacing trees and some houses, along with establishment of new railway track that connects to the station. Overall, remarkable changes were made between 1990 and 2005. A major development took place where a factory was constructed and a ferry service was established, occupying all the area of aged houses and trees.
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made at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
Initially
the ratio of
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was high in 1990
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number
of
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declined.

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with, in year 1990, a
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can be
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seen
towards the north of seaside along with a building at west. 2 bridges
were made
that connects to the railway station. A school and a hospital
were made
at the northern-eastern side and a parking towards the south of hospital.
Furthermore
, a railway
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was made
at the south-east direction.

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, in 2005
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of
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took place. Major proportion of area that
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by
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was replaced
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of buildings and a supermarket. An airport
was established
previously covered by trees and more
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were
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added
to area around the hospital.
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, a new factory
was made
replacing trees and
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, along with establishment of new railway
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that connects to the station.

Overall
, remarkable
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were made
between 1990 and 2005. A major development took place where a factory
was constructed
and a ferry service
was established
, occupying all the area of aged
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houses
and trees.
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IELTS academic changes made at a place between several years

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