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changes in the maps, main similarities and differences

Two maps show the main differences from 1995. In general, the majorities of buildings and places were replaced. Moreover, a few parts of the town reminded unchanged. Over the time period, the area witnessed several developements. The farmland and forest park in to north-east were transformed into the golf playgroung and the tennis court. In the north-west the housing was not drasticaly reconstructed. However, four houses were build from 1995, and road close to the housing was prologned. In the west, the shop ares was replaced by restaurants. The fish market, opposit to the shop area, was reconstructed into the apatments. In the east of the town, the hotel and the cafe stayed the same. Although, the car parking was added over the 21 yeas. Lastly, on the botton of the picture, the fishing port was removed from the sea. Therefore, in the present, the sea is without any constructions.
Two maps
show
the main differences from 1995.
In general
, the majorities of buildings and places
were replaced
.
Moreover
, a few parts of the town reminded unchanged.

Over the time period, the area witnessed several
developements
. The farmland and forest park in to north-east
were transformed
into the golf
playgroung
and the tennis court. In the north-west the housing was not
drasticaly
reconstructed.
However
, four
houses
were build from 1995, and road close to the housing was
prologned
. In the west, the shop ares
was replaced
by restaurants. The fish market,
opposit
to the shop area,
was reconstructed
into the
apatments
.

In the east of the town, the hotel and the
cafe
stayed the same.
Although
, the car parking was
added
over the 21 yeas.
Lastly
, on the
botton
of the picture, the fishing port
was removed
from the sea.
Therefore
, in the present, the sea is without any constructions.
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IELTS academic changes in the maps, main similarities and differences

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3 paragraphs
150 words
6.5
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