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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows how finance, food processing, manufacturing, tourism and fussil fuel industries helped proposionaly to Brazil's economy in two different years (2009 and 2019 ) and predicted year 2029. Overall, the finance category shares the highest amount from Brazil economy. It is clear that, from year 2009 to 2019 finance, fusil fule and food processing risen up to 5% and 20% respectively. however both manufacturing and tourism diclined ther proportions in 5%. In the predicted year 2029, only finance sector will show there progress. Tourism industry will continue there economy 21% after 2019. The most significant decrease show in manufacturing industry. there progress will drop down in 50% from around 16%. Food processing sector will decline there economy
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, food processing, manufacturing, tourism and
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fuel industries
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helped
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proposionaly
to Brazil's economy in two
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years (2009 and 2019
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and predicted
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2029.
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, the
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finance
category shares the highest amount from Brazil economy.

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that, from
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2009 to 2019
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finance
,
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fusil
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fule
and food processing risen up to 5% and 20%
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however
both manufacturing and tourism
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diclined
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proportions in 5%. In the predicted
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2029,
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finance
sector will
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show
there progress. Tourism industry will continue there economy 21% after 2019. The most significant decrease
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in manufacturing industry.
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there
progress will
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drop down
in 50% from around 16%. Food processing sector will decline there
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economy
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IELTS academic The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

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