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changes in prices of high-tech gadgets; navigation system and smartphone

changes in prices of high-tech gadgets; navigation system and smartphone lJWD

The graph compares the value of high-tech gadgets in terms of million dollars which were changed over time in some country between 2004 and 2006. It can be obviously seen although navigation system was valuable more than smartphone did at the beginning, as the years went the gadgets became more identical. According to the graph, the amount of navigation system was about 23% as much as smartphones did in 2004; 3900 versus 3100. For the following years, the only year that both gadgets declined their value was in 2005, even though it was much fastest for navigation system: about 3200 and 2800 for navigation system and smartphones respectively. While navigation system gently decreased, smartphones slightly went up and the difference became smaller. Unlike last year, navigation system became upward and the smartphone changed direction and became downwards until 2006. Finally, they almost became equal in 2006. The sum up, excluding the 2005 for both gadgets, their trends were downward during the whole period.

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