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Changes in Further Education from 1970 to 1990

Changes in Further Education from 1970 to 1990 KyKPk
This chart demonstrates changes in full-time and part-time further education over a 3-decade period from 1970 to 1990. Female further education has increased tremendously the entire time in both full-time education and part-time education. Male enrollment in part-time education has slightly increased after a slump. Male full-time further education has increased steadily the entire time.
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in full-time and part-time
further
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education
over a 3-decade period from 1970 to 1990.

Female
further
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education
has increased
tremendously
the entire time in both full-time
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education
and part-time education.

Male enrollment in part-time
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education
has
slightly
increased after a slump. Male full-time
further
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education
has increased
steadily
the entire time.

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