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You enjoy going to your local coffee shop to work, read, and meet friends. However, every time you go, the seats and tables are dirty and you have to clean them up.

You enjoy going to your local coffee shop to work, read, and meet friends. However, every time you go, the seats and tables are dirty and you have to clean them up. 6Lnbr
To The Manager Van Coffee Shop Hi, I am a fan of the products being offered at your coffee shop, but today I am writing to address an issue which has to be taken care of. I have introduced Van coffee shop to plenty of my friends as I love the hazel nut latte and the freshly baked cookies and cakes at the shop, also the shop's ambience and location make it a great place to read and work from. But to our misery, the cleanliness and hygiene at the shop is pathetic. Every time we visit the coffee shop, we find morsels of food and coffee cup stains on the tables and chairs, which we have to clean up before occupying the seat. I would suggest you to either designate a person for cleaning, who can keep the tables and chairs clean or give out coasters with coffees and use (recycled disposable) paper table cloths which can be changed for every customer. You are aware of the recent health scare we all have witnessed, it is imminent that food and beverage handling places have to strictly follow proper hygiene and cleanliness practices to retain customers and food licenses. Hope you consider my advice and act on it. Regards John Smith
To The Manager

Van
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Coffee
Shop

Hi,

I am a fan of the products
being offered
at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
I am writing to address an issue which
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
has to
be taken
care of.

I have introduced Van
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of my friends as I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
the hazel nut latte and the
freshly
baked cookies and cakes at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
,
also
the shop's ambience and location
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it a great place to read and work from.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
to our misery, the cleanliness and hygiene at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
is pathetic. Every time we visit the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
, we find morsels of food and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
cup stains on the tables and chairs, which we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
clean up
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
occupying the seat.

I would suggest you to either designate a person for cleaning, who can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the tables and chairs clean or give out coasters with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffees
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
(recycled disposable) paper table cloths which can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
for every customer. You are aware of the recent health scare we all have witnessed, it is imminent that food and beverage handling places
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
strictly
follow proper hygiene and cleanliness
The verb 'practices' is used with the gerund form: "practices retaining".
practices to retain
customers and food licenses.

Hope you consider my advice and act on it.

Regards

John Smith
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IELTS academic You enjoy going to your local coffee shop to work, read, and meet friends. However, every time you go, the seats and tables are dirty and you have to clean them up.

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210 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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