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Casuarina Beach with tourists

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The bar chart shows where tourists stay at Casuarina Beach. Overall, more visitors stay in hotels than in any other kind of accommodation. The local hotels are commonest place to stay at Casuarina Beach. The 34 % tourist stay at local hotels. International hotels and guest houses are also popular with 22% and 24%. In the next places the youth hostel and complites are attract the tourists. 3% of visitors stay other places.
The bar chart
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where tourists
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Casuarina
Beach.

Overall
, more visitors
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in
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hotels
than in any other kind of accommodation.

The local
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hotels
are
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commonest
place to
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stay
at
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Casuarina
Beach. The 34 % tourist
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at local
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hotels
. International
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hotels
and guest
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houses
are
also
popular with 22% and 24%. In the
next
places the youth hostel and
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complites
are
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attract
the tourists. 3% of visitors
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other places.

IELTS academic Casuarina Beach with tourists

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
73 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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