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The supplied pie charts depict the shifts in annual expenditure by a certain UK school in three different times, 981, 1991, and 2001.

The supplied pie charts depict the shifts in annual expenditure by a certain UK school in three different times, 981, 1991, and 2001. e5rXJ
The supplied pie charts depict the shifts in annual expenditure by a certain UK school in three different times, 981, 1991, and 2001. In general, teachers’ salaries were the highest proportion of annual spending percentage. In contrast, insurance was consistent as the lowest percentage of annual school spending over the times observed. Looking at the details, in 1981 teacher’s salaries accounted nearly a half, 40% of total school costs and increased significantly in 1991 which accounted exactly a half, 50% and remained the highest spending in 2001 as well, 45%. Meanwhile, other worker’s salaries, references, and furniture and tool fluctuated and amassed big percentage of school disbursement all together, it was about 40% in average. On the other hand, insurance was the lowest percentage of total school spending overall observed years. It was only 2% of total spending in 1981 and remained the tiniest fraction subsequently in 1991 and 2001, 3% and 8% respectively.
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costs and increased
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in 1991 which accounted exactly a half, 50% and remained the highest
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in 2001
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, 45%. Meanwhile, other worker’s salaries, references, and furniture and tool fluctuated and amassed
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disbursement all together, it was about 40% in average.

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in 1981 and remained the tiniest fraction
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IELTS academic The supplied pie charts depict the shifts in annual expenditure by a certain UK school in three different times, 981, 1991, and 2001.

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