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Both provided maps illustrate the changes between two distinctive period of time in an institution’s dormitory over the course of 11 years starting in 2010

Both provided maps illustrate the changes between two distinctive period of time in an institution’s dormitory over the course of 11 years starting in 2010 5AEyN

Both provided maps illustrate the changes between two distinctive period of time in an institution’s dormitory over the course of 11 years starting in 2010. In General, it can be observed that the campus underwent a significant change through time, the number of bedrooms have been increased from 3 to 5 rooms and also 2 out of 3 gardens have been replaced for other purposes. 10 years ago, in the north of the campus was where the living room situated, in the close vicinity of that was the garden. 11 years later, the garden was demolished for the pupil’s place for relaxation and also the living room. When it come to the kitchen, it has experienced an upgrade for more aims. In term of the hallway which is led from the main entrance in has been shortened the space for erecting the en-suit room which is located in the southeast of the dormitory. Speaking of the external side, it can be seen that the former garden situated in the opposite of the En-suit room has been changed into the automobile parking.

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 between two distinctive period of time in an institution’s dormitory over the course of 11 years starting in 2010.

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change
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garden
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