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Book 13 test 4 Changes at the sport centre Page 94

Book 13 test 4 Changes at the sport centre Page 94 bD0xQ
Both diagrams display the actual situation of the University Sport Centre and the planned changes for the future. To start with, the main developments will concern the addition of a second swimming pool and the extension of the principal unit by the inclusion of new indoors spaces by sacrificing the two outdoor courts. Moreover, while the reception and the central zone of the present sport centre will remain immutable, the frontal part of it will be undergone in evident changes. Specifically speaking, two changing rooms will be included and located at the south-western and the south eastern edges of the edifice. The former will serve directly the opposite leisure pool, and the latter will be adjacent to the new build café. A sport shop will be placed symmetrically on the left side of the main entrance. The gym on the north zone of the unchanged central part of the venue (reception, pool, changing room and seating) will be extended towards east up to the most external new dance studios at the border of the construction. A corridor will be separated the two dance studios from a new sport hall which will be erected next to the seating in the place where a outdoor courts is now available. In short, the centre will be renewed at expense of open-air facilities, that will be replaced by new equipped indoor spaces.
Both diagrams display the actual situation of the University
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Sport
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Centre
and the planned
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changes
for the future.

To
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start
with, the main developments will concern the addition of a second swimming pool and the extension of the principal unit by the inclusion of
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new
indoors spaces by sacrificing the two outdoor courts.
Moreover
, while the reception and the central zone of the present
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sport
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
will remain immutable, the frontal part of it will be undergone in evident
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
.

Specifically
speaking, two changing rooms will
be included
and located at the south-western and the
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south eastern
edges of the edifice. The former will serve
directly
the opposite leisure pool, and the latter will be adjacent to the
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new
build café. A
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sport
shop will
be placed
symmetrically
on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
side of the main entrance.

The gym on the north zone of the unchanged central part of the venue (reception, pool, changing room and seating) will
be extended
towards east up to the most external
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new
dance studios at the border of the construction. A corridor will
be separated
the two dance studios from a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sport
hall which will
be erected
next
to the seating in the place where
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a
outdoor courts is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
available.

In short, the
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
will
be renewed
at expense of open-air facilities, that will
be replaced
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
equipped indoor spaces.
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IELTS academic Book 13 test 4 Changes at the sport centre Page 94

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5 paragraphs
228 words
5.5
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