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Average diet of Americans in 1990 and 2005

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The pie charts display data regarding the average diet of Americans in 1990 and 2005. Overall, Americans lessened their consumption of fat and sugar throughout the 15-year period. However, they included an increased amount of starch in their diets. The biggest change was in the consumption of starch. It accounted for just over one-fifth of the typical diet in the US in 1990, but this almost doubled to 43% in 2005. This rise was in contrast with the reduction in the amount of fat consumed where the figure decreased from 42% in 1990 to 12% less 15 years later. In addition, a similar trend occurred in sugar intake which fell from 24% in 1990 to 15% in 2005. Finally, the amount of protein remained unchanged, which was a little over a tenth of the American diet.
The pie charts display data regarding the average diet of Americans in 1990 and 2005.

Overall
, Americans lessened their consumption of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fat
and sugar throughout the 15-year period.
However
, they included an increased amount of starch in their diets.

The biggest
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
was in the consumption of starch. It accounted for
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just
over one-fifth of the typical diet in the US in 1990,
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but
this almost doubled to 43% in 2005. This rise was
in contrast
with the reduction in the amount of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fat
consumed where the figure decreased from 42% in 1990 to 12% less 15 years later.
In addition
, a similar trend occurred in sugar intake which fell from 24% in 1990 to 15% in 2005.
Finally
, the amount of protein remained unchanged, which was a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
over a tenth of the American diet.
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