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BIG SALARY IS MUCH MORE IMPORTANT THAN JOB SATISFACTION. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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The map below illustrates the alters that have taken place in a seaside area since 1995. Overall, it is evident that there has been significant replacements and changes over the 20 year period, such as the change of farmland to the center of the golf court. Since 1995, the farmland in the northeast has been abolished and replaced by a golf center. At the same time, trees have been cut down in the area and replaced to small tennis court. As well as the fish market in the southwest has been abolished an replaced by several apartments. However, other features either remain the same or have been enlarged. Small increases have been observed in apartments. Besides, the hotels remained the same and a car park has been added next to it. There has been been no change in the café in the south.
The map below illustrates the alters that have taken place in a seaside area since 1995.

Overall
, it is evident that there has been significant replacements and
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changes
over the
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "20-year"
20 year
period, such as the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
of farmland to the center of the golf court.

Since 1995, the farmland in the northeast has
been abolished
and replaced by a golf center. At the same time, trees have been
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cut
down in the area and replaced to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
tennis court.
As well
as the fish market in the southwest has
been abolished
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an
replaced by several apartments.

However
, other features either remain the same or have
been enlarged
.
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Small
increases have
been observed
in apartments.
Besides
, the hotels remained the same and a car park has been
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added
next
to it. There has
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been been
no
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change
in the café in the south.

IELTS academic BIG SALARY IS MUCH MORE IMPORTANT THAN JOB SATISFACTION.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
143 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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