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Big family vs. small family

Big family vs. small family GJ7ye
Family's size changes significantly through years, there are various reasons that lead to this alternation. Apart from the extended and nuclear families, we can classify families into big and small ones too. First of all, big families see to be more close-knit and supportive. Moreover; you can count on every single member of your family when you are struggling with a problem. On the other hand, big families can bring some disadvantages in comparison to small ones too. Small families have more depended atmosphere and normally well-disciplined children bring up by these sorts of families. In order to there are not several children in this type of family, most of their kids did not experience a care free child hood. In sum, each of these families have its issues and the best response to family atmosphere is adapting yourself to it and enjoying every single moment of being with them.
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, we can classify
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to be more close-knit and supportive.
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when you are struggling with a problem.
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have more
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atmosphere and
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well-disciplined children bring up by these sorts of
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. In order to there are not several children in this type of
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, most of their kids did not experience a care free child hood. In sum, each of these
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have its issues and the best response to
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atmosphere is adapting yourself to it and enjoying every single moment of being with them.
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IELTS academic Big family vs. small family

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  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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