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below is a flow diagram showing how fish are canned after being delivered to the canning factory

below is a flow diagram showing how fish are canned after being delivered to the canning factory PR6qp

The given process illustrates various steps regarding to be performed in process of fish canning. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, fish storing begin with cleaning and ended up with reserved in stock house which is a long and tedious process. According to the diagram in more detail, the process begins with cleaning fish. Then cleaned fish is washed clearly before it soaked. Afterwards, soaked fish is preserved in salt. Consequently, freeze-dried fish is placed into cans and it get sealed. After this step there comes most crucial stage where cans are heated in order to kill bacteria. Following step is labeling heated cans and get prepared for put in box. Finally boxes are stored in warehouse.

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