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This graph shows the different average annual expenditures, by US consumers, of cell phone and residential phone between the years 2001 and 2010.

This graph shows the different average annual expenditures, by US consumers, of cell phone and residential phone between the years 2001 and 2010. n6dpK
This graph shows the different average annual expenditures, by US consumers, of cell phone and residential phone between the years 2001 and 2010. it's easy too see how residential phone services have had an important decrease in only 10 years, but in 2010 there are people who buy residential phone until at an averege annnual expenditures of 400 dollars. Instead, in 2001, a few people got a cell phone, infact residential phone services had only 200 dollars of average annual expenditures. But in only ten years there was an important grow of the tecnology, and so an important increase of the use and the expenditures of cell phone. the grap shows that between 2006 and 2007 there was an equal average annual expenditures of cell phone and residential phone. So, people in US, used between cell phone and residential phone at the same time. But it's easy to see how residential phone down ward always more in the years.
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