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The line graph illustrates the changing numbers of incidents from burglary, car theft and robbery in a period of time starting from 2010 until 2019 in Panama city.

The line graph illustrates the changing numbers of incidents from burglary, car theft and robbery in a period of time starting from 2010 until 2019 in Panama city. GMrY2
The line graph illustrates the changing numbers of incidents from burglary, car theft and robbery in a period of time starting from 2010 until 2019 in Panama city. Overall, the number of incidents from burglary have reached a peak between the other places, However, the incidents from robbery have the lowest number, whereas the incidents from car theft have the middle average between them. In 2010, the number of incidents who are from burglary was increased slightly by having about 3400 incidents, then in 2011 to 2013 it started to drop by having around 2600 incidents, whereas the incidents who are from car theft were slightly increased, but in 2011 to 2013 they were decreased. In 2014 the incidents from burglary were sharply decreased, while in 2014 to 2019 the incidents from car theft were rising steadily. In 2015 to 2019 the number of incidents was suddenly increased to reach a steady point. In sharp contrast to this, In 2010 to 2012 the number of incidents from robbery was raised slightly, whereas from 2012 to 2015 it started to lower. In 2015 the incidents recovered by having almost 900 incidents. While in 2017 to 2018 it decreased a little bit, but In 2019 It was rising slightly again.
The line graph illustrates the changing
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and robbery in a period of time starting from 2010 until 2019 in
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Panama city
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have reached a peak between the other places,
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from robbery have the lowest
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have the middle average between them.

In 2010, the
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who are from
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was increased
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by having about 3400
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, then in 2011 to 2013 it
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to drop by having around 2600
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, whereas the
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were
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decreased, while in 2014 to 2019 the
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were rising
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2015 to 2019 the
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was raised
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2015 the
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recovered by having almost 900
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. While in 2017 to 2018 it decreased a
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In 2019 It was rising
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again.

IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the changing numbers of incidents from burglary, car theft and robbery in a period of time starting from 2010 until 2019 in Panama city.

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