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before and after of island

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The shown two maps gives us information about before and after the construction of island. Before there was nothing only sand and sea but after tourist facilities it has changed. Moving to the details, before tourist facilities the island was empty, there was only palm trees around. No interest for that island no one goes there however, you can make it beautiful and useful, in same time earn money. After it has changed, they made tourist zone to that island. Center of island they made accommodation, near it there was reception for registering and taking rooms. Near the sea they have built restaurant, close to beach there was also some accommodation, around beautiful palm trees. They also have settled up a pier for getting on to ships for traveling around the sea. Beach and pier were in different places, you can go to beach and swim, rest and have a fun there. In conclusion, everything that is simple, boring you can make it interesting and beautiful place, in same time useful for everyone.
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sand and sea
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after tourist facilities it has
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changed
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Moving to the
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tourist facilities the
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was empty, there was
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palm trees around. No interest for that
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no one goes there
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and useful, in same time earn money. After it has
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changed
, they made tourist zone to that
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. Center of
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they made accommodation, near it there was reception for registering and taking rooms. Near the sea they have built restaurant, close to beach there was
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accommodation, around
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palm trees. They
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places, you can go to beach and swim, rest and have a fun there.

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IELTS academic before and after of island

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3 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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