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As it can be seen from the bar chart, in the year 1970 there were 2. 5 million marriages and 1 million divorced people in the USA. In the next decade, total number of married people remained the same as in the previous decade, however, the divorce rates were increased by 0. 4 million compared to 1970. In the year 1990, marriages decreased in number by 0. 25 million in comparison to last two consecutive decades, likewise, divorce rates also dropped down to just above 1 million as compared to 1. 4 millions in 1980. In 2000, there were 2 million married and 1 million divorced people in the USA

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