Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

he first graph depicts who on the movie

he first graph depicts who on the movie KVQ7M
The first graph depicts the number of marriages and divorces in the United States during a 30-year period beginning in 1970. The second graph shows the proportions of different marital situations among American adults in two years, 1970 and 2000. Overall, there was a definite decreasing trend in the number of individuals marrying in the United States. Although the majority of adult Americans were married in both recorded years, the number of persons who remained single in 2000 was significantly greater.
The
first
graph depicts the number of marriages and divorces in the United States during a 30-year period beginning in 1970. The second graph
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
the proportions of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
marital situations among American adults in two years, 1970 and 2000.

Overall
, there was a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
definite
decreasing trend in the number of individuals marrying in the United States. Although the majority of adult Americans
were married
in both recorded years, the number of persons who remained single in 2000 was
significantly
greater.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic he first graph depicts who on the movie

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
81 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    The first graph depicts change in the number of marriages
    The first graph depicts the change in the number of marriages and divorces in the United States during a 30-year period beginning in 1970. The second graph shows the proportions of different marital situations among American adults in two years, 1970 and 2000. Overall, there was a definite decreasi...
  • 6band
    Write a description about the marriage in the US as presented in the charts below
    The first graph depicts the change in the number of marriages and divorces in the United States during a 30-year period beginning in 1970. The second graph shows the proportions of different marital situations among American adults in two years, 1970 and 2000. Overall, there was a definite decreasi...
  • 6band
    bar chart of marriages and divorces
    The first graph depicts the change in the number of marriages and divorces in the United States during a 30-year period beginning in 1970. The second graph shows the proportions of different marital situations among American adults in two years, 1970 and 2000. Overall, there was a definite decreasi...
  • 5.5band
    The graph below shows the quamtities
    The Line graph illustrates the goods transported in UK from the year 1974 to 2002 by different means of transportation such as road, water, rail and pipeline. the data has been calibrated in million tonnes. overall, it is lucid that, all the four modes of transport shows fluctuations throughout the ...
  • 6.5band
    different marital situations among American adults in two years, 1970 and 2000.
    The first graph depicts the change in the number of marriages and divorces in the United States during a 30-year period beginning in 1970. The second graph shows the proportions of different marital situations among American adults in two years, 1970 and 2000. Overall, there was a definite decreasi...
  • 5band
    Bar graph shows the average calorie intake
    The given bar graph depicts the mean calorie ingestion per person in eight different nations in 2003. Overall, it can be seen from the chart that the economic state of the country is directly proportional to the calorie intake of citizens. The highest calorie intake had shown in n the USA whereas t...





Get more results for topic:
  • he first graph depicts who on the movie