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bar graph gives information of revenue generated by real estate in three different countries

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The given bar graph revils the information about income generated by an real estate agencies located in 3 different countries Italy, France and United Kingdom between the time spane of 5 years from 2010 to 2014. The given data are calibrated in billion US dollars. Overall, it can be seen that France and United Kingdom remains high and on the other hand Italy remains lowest among all 5 year. Firstly United Kingdom has acchived the highest amount of revenue generation in the year 2014 which was 17. 6 billion US dollars. And the lowest was achived by Italy which was in the year 2010. It was around 7. 4 billion dollars. In first two years France was leading at the top by 13. 2 and 14. 4 billion US dollars respectly in the year 2010 and 2011. Secondly by the year 2012 the lead which was hold by France was now taken over by United Kingdom which continues till the ending year which was 2014. Italy was always at the lowest in all five years which remains between 7. 4 to 9. 9 billion US dollars.
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Kingdom remains high and
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the highest amount of revenue generation in the
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2014 which was 17. 6
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2010. It was around 7. 4
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2010 and 2011.

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2012 the lead which was hold by France was
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IELTS academic bar graph gives information of revenue generated by real estate in three different countries

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