Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The chart illustrates the information about British people’s contribution to charity based on their ages in two different years 1990 and 2010. people gave more charity in 1990 as compared to 2010

The chart illustrates the information about British people’s contribution to charity based on their ages in two different years 1990 and 2010. people gave more charity in 1990 as compared to 2010 yNkoD
The chart illustrates the information about British people’s contribution to charity based on their ages in two different years 1990 and 2010. Overall, people gave more charity in 1990 as compared to 2010. However, people aged 36-65 gave more charity then other age groups. People aged 18-25 were least to donate money. In 1990, people with age group 18 to 25 years donated less among all, 17%. From here, the percentage increased notably. People aged 26 to 35 years donated almost double, 31% and people aged 36 to 50 years gave maximum charity among all age groups. A slight decline shown with age group 51-65 and over 65 years, 35% and 32% respectively. In 2010, people with age group 18-50 donated less as compared to 1990 while others increased their donations in 2010.
The chart illustrates the information about British
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people’s
contribution to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
charity
based on their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ages
in two
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
years 1990 and 2010.
Overall
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
gave more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
charity
in 1990 as compared to 2010.
However
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
aged
36-65 gave more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
charity
Did you mean "than"?
then
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
groups
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
aged
18-25 were least to donate money.

In 1990,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
18 to 25 years donated less among all, 17%. From here, the percentage increased
notably
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
aged
26 to 35 years donated almost double, 31% and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
aged
36 to 50 years gave maximum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
charity
among all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
groups
. A slight decline shown with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
51-65 and over 65 years, 35% and 32%
respectively
.

In 2010,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
18-50 donated less
Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.
as
compared to 1990 while others increased their donations in 2010.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The chart illustrates the information about British people’s contribution to charity based on their ages in two different years 1990 and 2010. people gave more charity in 1990 as compared to 2010

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
133 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The chart illustrates the information about British people’s contribution to charity based on their ages in two different years 1990 and 2010. people gave more charity in 1990 as compared to 2010