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As can be seen from the graph below information about the three sectors to the UK economy in the twentieth

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As can be seen from the graph below information about the three sectors to the UK economy in the twentieth century Overoll, Three has main sectors. In different years than Agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial servicesAcording the first years naturally connected Agriculture and Manufacturing sectors in 1900 there was a only between 45%. Then Business and Fincancial sector only half-tenth of this year. As well as in the 1950 Agriculture sector slight increase than Manufacturing indicateing rose 10% percent so that year Business and Financial sector there was aa dramatice increase than from 1900. Also in 1975 three service are lesses from other years. For instance Agriculture there was sharply decrise this persent one-tenth of and Manufacturing was reletively a bit more 20% persent. In the same year Business and Financial sector sometimes rapidly grew. And then in the last year 2000 Agriculture was not rose than Manufacturing grow up one-fifth of this year more rose Manufacturing than other years. Business and financial servise was sometimes significantly inreased from 2% to 35% persent,
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IELTS academic As can be seen from the graph below information about the three sectors to the UK economy in the twentieth

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