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The diagram illustrates that there are different stages for manufacturing bricks in an industry.

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The diagram illustrates that there are different stages for manufacturing bricks in an industry. This includes eight stages in total involving clay digging, blending, moulding, heating, drying, packaging and delivery to the desired areas. Firstly, the unprepared clay is dug out from the ground and spread over the metal grid. Afterwards, the clay is then blended with sand and water to achieve desired texture. Once the mixture has achieved, it is cut with wire cutter or processed in a mould box. Next, the moulded bricks are heated in the drying oven for 24-48 hours as the first step of drying process. Later, moderate to high temperature from 200*C- 980*C and from 870*C-1300*C are required to achieve hardness and strength of a qualified brick. Once the drying and heating are completed, they are transferred to a cooling chamber again for 48-72 hours as a final and is important stage. Finally, the bricks are ready for packaging and delivered to the construction sites and factories.

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bricks
 in an industry. This includes eight stages in total involving clay digging, blending, Possible spelling mistake. 'moulding' is British English.molding
moulding
, heating, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdustyaridtorridparchedbarrenbare
drying
, packaging and delivery to the desired areas.

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, the unprepared clay is dug
 out from the ground and spread over the metal grid. Afterwards, the clay is then blended with sand and water to achieve desired texture. Once the mixture has achieved, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 with wire cutter or processed in a Possible spelling mistake. 'mould' is British English.mold
mould
 box. Next
, the Possible spelling mistake found.moldedmounded
moulded
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bricks
are heated
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdustyaridtorridparchedbarrenbare
drying
 oven for 24-48 hours as the first
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drying
 process. Later, moderate to high temperature from Replace by the typographical symbol.200×C200·C
200*C
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 and from Replace by the typographical symbol.870×C870·C
870*C
-Replace by the typographical symbol.1300×C1300·C
1300*C
are required
 to achieve hardness and strength of a qualified You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
brick
. Once the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdustyaridtorridparchedbarrenbare
drying
 and heating are completed
, they are transferred
 to a cooling chamber again for 48-72 hours as a final and is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 stage.

Finally
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 are ready for packaging and delivered to the construction sites and factories. 