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As an overall understanding, it is clear that petrol and oil lead as the prime source of fuel and this trend is assumed to continue in the future while hydropower started and is predicted to have the least demand in the entire period.

As an overall understanding, it is clear that petrol and oil lead as the prime source of fuel and this trend is assumed to continue in the future while hydropower started and is predicted to have the least demand in the entire period. Grl8o
As an overall understanding, it is clear that petrol and oil lead as the prime source of fuel and this trend is assumed to continue in the future while hydropower started and is predicted to have the least demand in the entire period. To begin with, the graph indicates that petrol, oil and gas move with upward trends compared to natural gas that has stability in the last couple of years. Interestingly, the consumption of petrol and oil started with 35q in 1980, gradually touched up over 40q in 2008; Nonetheless, eventually, was predicted to reach around 50q in 2020 contrary to coal and natural gas that began with 20q and 16q in 1980, gradually fluctuated till 2012 and finally settled down approximately 25q and nearly 30q, respectively. On the other hand, Although nuclear, solar and hydropower set off at the same point, finally nuclear was predicted to dominate among the three fuels. Likewise, considering the fact, nuclear, solar and hydropower started with bellow 5q, having the same starting point, in 1980, slightly waved between 1990 and 2010; however, the trends were thought to touch to approximately 7q, 6q and 4q, respectively whereas petrol and oil, coal and natural gas were top three natural resources that were consumed as fuel.
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lead as the prime source of fuel and this trend
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to continue in the future while hydropower
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started
and
is predicted
to have the least demand in the entire period.

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,
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and
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gas
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move
with upward trends compared to
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natural
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gas
that has stability in the last couple of years.
Interestingly
, the consumption of
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petrol
and
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oil
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started
with 35q in 1980,
gradually
touched up over 40q in 2008; Nonetheless,
eventually
,
was predicted
to reach around 50q in 2020 contrary to coal and
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natural
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gas
that began with 20q and 16q in 1980,
gradually
fluctuated till 2012 and
finally
settled down approximately 25q and
nearly
30q,
respectively
.

On the other hand
, Although nuclear, solar and hydropower set off at the same point,
finally
nuclear
was predicted
to dominate among the three fuels.
Likewise
, considering the fact, nuclear, solar and hydropower
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started
with bellow 5q, having the same starting point, in 1980,
slightly
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however
, the trends were
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thought
to touch to approximately 7q, 6q and 4q,
respectively
whereas
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petrol
and
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, coal and
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were top three
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IELTS academic As an overall understanding, it is clear that petrol and oil lead as the prime source of fuel and this trend is assumed to continue in the future while hydropower started and is predicted to have the least demand in the entire period.

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