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Advantages and disadvantages of having a smartphone

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The trend in which people own a personal smartphone has gained increasing popularity in recent years. Some think that there are many benefits of doing it, while others argue that it also has several drawbacks to residents. This essay will discuss both points of view. It is not deniable that having a smartphone brings numerous advantages for everyone. The main positive point is that the cellular telephone makes our life more convenient. This is because everybody can easily contact each other in order to make friends more and exchange work so that productivity is enhanced. Furthermore, phones are so user-friendly that they broaden somebody's knowledge simply. Thanks to a lot of websites and applications, people also can search for unknown information and update the latest news around the world. For example, if you are driving and you don't know the way exactly, you can use Google Maps. As a result, people can do almost anything just have a smartphone Despite the attractions, the disadvantages do exist. One is that smartphone is so expensive. Since not all people can own an individual

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