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a method of producing leather goods

a method of producing leather goods A3WVw

The diagram illustrates different stages in the process of producing leather goods from the drying of animal skin to manafacturing of various leatherproducts. Initial step is drying of animal skins under the sun. After that, it is delivery to factor by truck and washing using water with lime, before the dried skins are flattened in the two roller, they go soaked by a chemical, namely, lime. Then, dried skins are soaked by Tannin, which is a mixture of water and vegetable matter. Moreover, proccessed skin are polished and only then teh are tranported to factory by truck. the last stage is factory is produced various leather goods, such as, shoes, bags and balls. Overall, the proccess of producing leather goods is quite compicated process that consists of multiple stages.

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