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The chart exhibits the exports of a nation in multiple categories from 2015 to 2016, and the table conveys the changes in percentage for each category during the same period.

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The chart exhibits the exports of a nation in multiple categories from 2015 to 2016, and the table conveys the changes in percentage for each category during the same period. Overall, in terms of inclination, all patterns increased except for gems and jewellery. The most dominant exports, which were oil based goods and manufactured goods, were equivalent in sales volumes. Petroleum products in 2005 were $60 billions, prior to a slight increase by 3% to about $62 billions throughout the period. The remaining exports: gems and jewellery, agricultural goods and textiles, were all less than $50 billions. While the farm produce vaguely rose by 0. 81% from $31 billions to about $32 billions between 2015 and 2016, the value of textiles showed a moderate growth by 15. 4% from almost $29 billions to about $31 billions in the same period. In contrast, precious gems and jewellery declined by 5. 18%, which constituted about $42 billions in 2015 and a subsequent $40 million in 2016.
The chart exhibits the exports of a nation in multiple categories from 2015 to 2016, and the table conveys the
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in percentage for each category during the same period.
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, in terms of inclination, all patterns increased
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except for
gems and
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jewellery
.

The most dominant exports, which were oil based
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goods
and manufactured
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goods
, were equivalent in sales volumes. Petroleum products in 2005 were $60
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billions
, prior to a slight increase by 3% to about $62
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billions
throughout the period.

The remaining exports: gems and
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jewellery
, agricultural
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goods
and textiles, were all less than $50
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billions
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the farm produce
vaguely
rose by 0. 81% from $31
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billions
to about $32
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billions
between 2015 and 2016, the value of textiles
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showed
a moderate growth by 15. 4% from almost $29
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billions
to about $31
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billions
in the same period.
In contrast
, precious gems and
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jewellery
declined by 5. 18%, which constituted about $42
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billions
in 2015 and a subsequent $40 million in 2016.

IELTS academic The chart exhibits the exports of a nation in multiple categories from 2015 to 2016, and the table conveys the changes in percentage for each category during the same period.

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