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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Y6qn
The diagram illustrates the different stages involved in the life of a frog. Frogs emerge from embryos laid in the water and start their life as tadpoles, slowly developing into adult frogs after passing through multiple stages in the process of development. Frogs begin their life as embryos laid in eggs in the water. The first stage of a frog's existence begins when the embryo develops into a tadpole. The second stage of development takes place when the tadpole starts developing appendages and the front legs start developing. The process of the development of the front legs is called breaking through. The next phase happens when the tadpole develops pulmonary breathing, enabling it to breathe both on land and water. It then further develops into a tadpole frog, wherein only a tail-like protrusion is present from the first phase. The frog then matures into an adult frog and the protrusion disappears.
The diagram illustrates the
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involved in the life of a frog.

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their life as
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tadpoles
,
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frogs
after passing through multiple
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in the process of development.

Frogs
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their life as embryos laid in eggs in the water. The
first
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of a frog's existence
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when the embryo develops into a
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. The second
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of development takes place when the
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developing appendages and the front legs
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developing.
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The
process of the development of the front legs
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breaking through.
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The
next
phase happens when the
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tadpole
develops pulmonary breathing, enabling it to breathe both on land and water. It then
further
develops into a
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tadpole
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frog
, wherein
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a tail-like protrusion is present from the
first
phase. The
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frog
then matures into an adult
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and the protrusion disappears.
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IELTS academic A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.

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