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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. kJDN

The chart illustrates the number of students from Australia and abroad who have taken admission in the universities of Australia over a span of ten years. The total enrollment of local students of the country in higher education has consistently increased over the years from 2001 to 2007 before plateauing to 600000 for the next three years while the number of students seeking admissions from outside the continent steeply rose from 20000 to the peak of slightly higher than 80000 in the period of ten years. The initial number of students is 400000 for the local students which in manifolds than the figures of the overseas students. There is a fluctuation in the commencement of in-country pupils throughout the given period of time whereas an upward trend is visible in the incoming movement of the overseas admissions from 2001 to 2010. In all the local students outnumber in terms of enrollments in the Australian universities as compared to the aspirants flying from abroad.

The chart illustrates the number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 from Australia and abroad who have taken admission in the universities of Australia over a span of ten years.

The total enrollment of local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 of the country in higher education has consistently
 increased over the years from 2001 to 2007 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 plateauing to 600000 for the next
 three years while the number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 seeking admissions from outside the continent steeply
 rose from 20000 to the peak of slightly
 higher than 80000 in the period of ten years. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 initial number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 is 400000 for the local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 which in manifolds than the figures of the overseas students.

There is a fluctuation in the commencement of in-country pupils throughout the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period of time whereas an upward trend is visible in the incoming movement of the overseas admissions from 2001 to 2010.

In all the local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 outnumber in terms of enrollments in the Australian universities as compared to the aspirants flying from abroad. 