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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. 7Dob
An inception of the data in line graphs reveals the percentage of the unemployed people in suburb and urban areas of Australia during the year 2012. From the overall perspective, it can be clearly observed that the unemployment situation was significantly critical in rural areas rather than in cities and towns. With the notable difference at the beginning, the proportion of those who did not work in both areas of Australia had been almost identical by the end of the period. With respect to suburbs, having rated at approximately 6. 5% in first quarter of the year, the percentage of the unemployed decreased dramatically by 2% in the third quarter. However, it had been followed by a sharp increase to over than 5% before the figures started fluctuating during the last months of 2012 and reaching final 5%. As for the proportion of people without a work in cities and towns, it initially comprised just more than 2% and subsequently experienced an excessive rise by almost 2% to 4% in the second quarter. Afterwards, there was a sudden decline to the same indicator which was seen at the start. Likewise, having gone up noticeably with an insignificant fall in fourth period, it had rocketed to just under than 5% which was almost similar to those of rural areas by the finish of 2012.
An inception of the data in line graphs reveals the percentage of the unemployed
people
in suburb and urban
areas
of Australia during the year 2012.

From the
overall
perspective, it can be
clearly
observed that the unemployment situation was
significantly
critical in rural
areas
rather
than in cities and towns. With the notable difference at the beginning, the proportion of those who did not work in both
areas
of Australia had been almost identical by the
end
of the period.

With respect to suburbs, having rated at approximately 6. 5% in
first
quarter of the year, the percentage of the unemployed decreased
dramatically
by 2% in the third quarter.
However
, it had
been followed
by a sharp increase to
over
than 5%
before
the figures
started
fluctuating during the last months of 2012 and reaching final 5%.

As for the proportion of
people
without a work in cities and towns, it
initially
comprised
just
more than 2% and
subsequently
experienced an excessive rise by almost 2% to 4% in the second quarter. Afterwards, there was a sudden decline to the same indicator which was
seen
at the
start
.
Likewise
, having gone up
noticeably
with an insignificant fall in fourth period, it had rocketed to
just
under
than 5% which was almost similar to those of rural
areas
by the finish of 2012.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

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  American English
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