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The table illustrates the survey conducted for UK residents to know the reason for traveling abroad from 1994-98.

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The table illustrates the survey conducted for UK residents to know the reason for traveling abroad from 1994-98. The bar graph depicts the different destinations traveled by UK residents. Overall, Spending Holidays abroad was the main reason for traveling outside the country and Westers Europe was the famous destination for spending their time off. UK citizens traveled to foreign countries because of several reasons (like Holiday, Business, Visit to friends, and other reasons). In 1998, there was an increase of 20% of travelers (20, 700 travelers) for spending holidays out of the country from 1994(15, 246 travelers). People visited abroad for business or to visit friends or relatives are very few comparative to Holiday in all the years. The famous destination of UK residents was western Europe among all the years, where approximately 1800 people visited in 1994 and it went upward up to 33% (240000 visitors). North America and other areas were least popular among natives of Uk, formal had around 3000 visitors I and latter had around 2000 travelers in all these years
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reason
for traveling abroad from 1994-98. The bar graph depicts the
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destinations traveled by UK residents.

Overall
, Spending
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Holidays
abroad was the main
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reason
for traveling outside the country and
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Westers
Europe was the
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famous
destination for spending their time off.

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UK citizens
traveled to foreign countries
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because
of several
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reasons
(like
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Holiday
, Business, Visit to friends, and other
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reasons)
. In 1998, there was an increase of 20% of
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travelers
(20, 700
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travelers)
for spending
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holidays
out of the country
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from 1994(15
, 246
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travelers)
.
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People
visited abroad for business or to visit friends or relatives are
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very
few comparative to
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Holiday
in all the years.

The
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famous
destination of UK residents was
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western Europe
among all the years, where approximately 1800
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people
visited in 1994 and it went upward up to 33% (240000 visitors). North America and other areas were least popular among natives of
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Uk
, formal had around 3000 visitors I and latter had around 2000
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travelers
in all these
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years

IELTS academic The table illustrates the survey conducted for UK residents to know the reason for traveling abroad from 1994-98.

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174 words
5.0
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