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1- While the spending on housing was 72.11 % in 2010 the spending was 22 %.

1- While the spending on housing was 72. 11 % in 2010 the spending was 22 %. 8apRm
1- While the spending on housing was 72. 11 % in 2010 the spending was 22 %. 2- The spending on food were 11. 2 % in 1950 and 34 % in 2010. 3- The biggest spending in 1950 is 72. 1 % while in 2010 the majority of money spent is on food. 4- Spending on other items was 4. 4 % In the first year and 19. 2 % in the second year. 5- The pie charts shows the typical expenditure of a household in 6 main categories. 5- There was an increase in spending in all areas except with housing and education, which showed a downward trend over the period given. 7- The least amount spent in both years was in health care. 8- There was significant decrease in spending on housing from 71 % to 22 %.
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on housing was 72. 11 % in 2010 the
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was 22 %.

2- The
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on food were 11. 2 % in 1950 and 34 % in 2010.

3- The biggest
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in 1950 is 72. 1 % while in 2010 the majority of money spent is on food.

4-
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on other items was 4. 4 % In the
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year and 19. 2 % in the second year.

5- The pie charts
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the typical expenditure of a household in 6 main categories.

5- There was an increase in
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in all areas except with housing and education, which
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a downward trend over the period
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7- The least amount spent in both years was in health care.

8- There was significant decrease in
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on housing from 71 % to 22 %.
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IELTS academic 1- While the spending on housing was 72. 11 % in 2010 the spending was 22 %.

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