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Influence of social media

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exist.

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gran pare

Does it cause problem in your community.

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In this digital World,
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difference
in opinion,

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and
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children
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grandparents and parents is

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Утоме


common. This can be more due

Involvement of New.

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•techonolgies


and

Western culture. This is lead to less

communication &
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children
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I
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in

thinking and to
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Nao
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,
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use
of smartphone, Laptop etc.

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is
Increasing day by day.
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New
generation

is more Involve or determined

in to

this. They
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spent
most of their
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time
on

social media. They find out
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very
less time

to communicate & their grandparents

they
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spent
most of
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.
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on
Social Media

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майским


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a

difference in
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betalen
.

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the
eating Habits. Older
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people
,
mostly


like home made food_

like to eat Street

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but
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new 0
food, Pizza & Homes

etc. They don't spend
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time
& their

on dinning table. A recent Survey

been done
in which they

w generation

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hadThere
is
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centainly
a difference

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Ideas
& action, their parents

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cahy
does these
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difference
exist.

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in


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thought


gran pare

Does it cause problem in your community.

→

In this digital World,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
difference
in opinion,

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Idea
of
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children
, from their

grandparents and parents is

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Утоме


common. This can be more due

Involvement of New.

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•techonolgies


and

Western culture. This is lead to less

communication &
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children
and parents.

I
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agree
& this,
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Deut
there is a
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difference
in

thinking and to
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see
the

would
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Nao
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a day" or simply "days"?
a days
,
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use
of smartphone, Laptop etc.

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is
Increasing day by day.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
New
generation

is more Involve or determined

in to

this. They
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spent
most of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
on

social media. They find out
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
less time

to communicate & their grandparents

they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spent
most of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
on
Social Media

Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
майским


There is
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als
a

difference in
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betalen
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
the
eating Habits. Older
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
,
mostly


like home made food_

like to eat Street

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new 0
food, Pizza & Homes

etc. They don't spend
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
& their

on dinning table. A recent Survey

been done
in which they

w generation

Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
had
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IELTS speaking Influence of social media

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19 paragraphs
370 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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