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My village my countryside

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The name of my village is Oriyat It is a small and beautiful village My village is completely surrounded by nature Around one thousand people live here There are a primary school and a middle school in my village My village also has a heath centre My villagers take part in every festival Most of the villagers are farmers Everyone in my village uses toilet So, I really love to live in this clean village
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There are a primary school and a middle school in my village

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IELTS speaking My village my countryside

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6 paragraphs
74 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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