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The crypto-currency Joshua Davis The New Yorker 87, 2011 It? not clear bifrain z'J legafl but there it no rampany in control and no one to arrest. here are lots of ways to make money: You can earn it, find it, counterfeit it, steal it. Or, ifyou’re Satoshi Nakamoto, a preternaturally talented computer coder, you can invent it. That’s what he did on the evening ofjanuary3, 2009, when he pressed a button on his keyboard and created a new currency called bitcoin. It was all bit and no coin. There was no paper, copper, or silver—just thirty-one thousand lines of code and an announcement on the Internet. Nakamoto, who …

The crypto-currency Joshua Davis The New Yorker 87, 2011 It? not clear bifrain z'J legafl but there it no rampany in control and no one to arrest. here are lots of ways to make money: You can earn it, find it, counterfeit it, steal it. Or, ifyou’re Satoshi Nakamoto, a preternaturally talented computer coder, you can invent it. That’s what he did on the evening ofjanuary3, 2009, when he pressed a button on his keyboard and created a new currency called bitcoin. It was all bit and no coin. There was no paper, copper, or silver—just thirty-one thousand lines of code and an announcement on the Internet. Nakamoto, who … NyWOd
The crypto-currency Joshua Davis The New Yorker 87, 2011 It? not clear bifrain z'J legafl but there it no rampany in control and no one to arrest. here are lots of ways to make money: You can earn it, find it, counterfeit it, steal it. Or, ifyou’re Satoshi Nakamoto, a preternaturally talented computer coder, you can invent it. That’s what he did on the evening ofjanuary3, 2009, when he pressed a button on his keyboard and created a new currency called bitcoin. It was all bit and no coin. There was no paper, copper, or silver—just thirty-one thousand lines of code and an announcement on the Internet. Nakamoto, who …
The crypto-currency

Joshua Davis

The New Yorker 87, 2011

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IELTS speaking The crypto-currency Joshua Davis The New Yorker 87, 2011 It? not clear bifrain z'J legafl but there it no rampany in control and no one to arrest. here are lots of ways to make money: You can earn it, find it, counterfeit it, steal it. Or, ifyou’re Satoshi Nakamoto, a preternaturally talented computer coder, you can invent it. That’s what he did on the evening ofjanuary3, 2009, when he pressed a button on his keyboard and created a new currency called bitcoin. It was all bit and no coin. There was no paper, copper, or silver—just thirty-one thousand lines of code and an announcement on the Internet. Nakamoto, who …

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