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1. Good: Has a good communication skill and ability to learn things and would be a good team, willing to learn things and enthusiastic person. Crisp and clear answers were provided to the point. Highly motivated as well 2. Above Good: Has a great communication with strong skills and knowledge to improvise from the current scenario, adaptable for the new challenges. Would be a hard working person, Willingness to grow faster. 3. Below Average: Has a nominal communication skill unable to communicate properly, Should improve on communication skills, but has ability to learn. Should be more communicative, should work on his skill set. 4. Very Poor: Has a very poor communication skill, unable to communicate properly repeatedly saying the same answer for all the questions. Has to work hard on her communication, Unable to answer any question properly.
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: Has a
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good
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communication
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skill
and ability to learn things and would be a
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good
team, willing to learn things and enthusiastic person. Crisp and
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clear
answers
were provided
to the point.
Highly
motivated as
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well


2. Above
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: Has a great
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communication
with strong
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skills
and knowledge to improvise from the
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current
scenario, adaptable for the new challenges. Would be a
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
hard working
person, Willingness to grow faster.

3. Below Average: Has a nominal
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communication
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skill
unable to communicate
properly
, Should
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improve
on
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communication
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skills
,
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but
has ability to learn. Should be more communicative, should work on his
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skill
set.

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Very
Poor: Has a
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very
poor
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communication
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skill
, unable to communicate
properly
repeatedly
saying the same answer for all the questions.
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Has to
work
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hard
on her
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communication
, Unable to answer any question
properly
.
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IELTS speaking feedback on students language

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
138 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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