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Describe a time when you changed your opinion You should say - When it was - What the original opinion was - Why you changed it - And explain how you felt about it

Describe a time when you changed your opinion You should say - When it was - What the original opinion was - Why you changed it - And explain how you felt about it XnYwY
people changing their views according the circumstances happened in life. I always prefer to take the advice of elders before making any decision so that I can get proper guidance. However, there are some incidents when I had to change my opinion Here, I would like to talk about one such incident when I had to change my opinion After I completion on my 12, I want to further study in CA. Because of my many classmates are starting preparation of CA after 1 week of board exams. I also want to start CA foundation class. But my parents are not allowing me for that. At time I was upstate. And decided that if my parents not allowing to study in CA then I can not study in other field. When I was not convince then my mother took me to my school to talk with my sir. Who always give me best advice for study. My sir told me that I don't Harry to start a Coaching class after 12. First I will complete my beacholer degree so that I have enough knowledge of finance and economic, which help me in my CA study also I have at least beacholer degree with me. And CA foundation is parallel to b. com degree. So after b. com I will start study in direct intermediate level. After I will understand the all concept, I was decided to start b. com. after the completion of b. com I was happy that I was charged my opinion.
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people
changing their views according the circumstances happened in life.

I always prefer to take the advice of elders
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before
making any decision
so
that I can
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get
proper guidance.

However
, there are
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some
incidents when I had to
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change
my opinion

Here, I would like to talk about one such incident when I had to
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change
my opinion

After
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I completion
on my 12, I want to
further
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study
in CA.
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Because
of my
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many
classmates are starting preparation of CA after 1 week of board exams. I
also
want to
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start
CA foundation
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class
.
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But
my parents are not allowing me for that. At
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time I
was upstate. And decided that if my parents not allowing to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in CA then I can not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in other field.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
I was not
Consider using a past participle here: "convinced".
convince
then my mother took me to my school to talk with my sir. Who always give
A determiner is probably missing here: "me the best".
me best
advice for
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study
. My sir
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told
me that I don't Harry to
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start
a Coaching
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class
after 12.
First
I will complete my
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beacholer
degree
so
that I have
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enough
knowledge of finance and economic, which
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help
me in my CA
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
also
I have at least
Possible spelling mistake found.
beacholer
degree with me. And CA foundation is parallel to b. com degree.
“So after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So after
b. com I will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
start
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in direct intermediate level.

After I will understand the all concept, I
was decided
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
start
b. com.
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after
the completion of b. com I was happy that I
was charged
my opinion.
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IELTS speaking Describe a time when you changed your opinion You should say - When it was - What the original opinion was - Why you changed it - And explain how you felt about it

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4 paragraphs
254 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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