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Talking About My Hometown

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My hometown is Matera. It's in South Italy. It's a very small town. But for me, it's one of the best town in Italy and also in Europe. And so, I really love Matera. I think I visit my hometown like 4 or 5 times per year because we have a lot of tourists and so when friends of mine comes to visit me and visit my hometown, I really love go with them. With a tourist guide just to see again the city. I really love of my hometown, the thing I really love of my town is the saxi, it's means a very old houses caste into the rock. It's the only cities in the entire world that has this type of houses. The oldest place in my hometown is "saxo. " I think it's like paleolithic or neolithic age. My hometown can be improved with for example a lot of transport because public transport is so bad and can be improved with a lot of tourist guide that speak non. . . that speaking a lot of languages for example Arabic, Russian and because at the moment, we have only French tourist guide and English tourist guide. I think with public transport that need to be improved. My hometown is changed since I were a child because for example now, we have a lot of really really good restaurants, a lot of really kind and cool park, and also we have a lot of B&B - bed and breakfast and we have a lot of hotel. And now we have a lot of people that knew Matera because Matera won the capital of the European Capital of Culture for 2019. So it all of Italy but also in all over in Europe. A lot of people can know Matera. And yeah I think it's a very good place to grow up.
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3 paragraphs
314 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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