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the importance History of Humankind

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History is one of the complex subjects where it changes for the time being. Also, history is combination of factors, such as event social and human that is linked each other. A lot of people seem to only saw it as occurrence of the past but they should be more profound to the event in the past. the history of Humankind is more important than they think, as it gives people information about “who we are” and “where we came from” because as people know incident that occur in the past connected with present time more. This makes people more understand about their heritage and legacy from generation to generation. However, a lot of chronicles has been lost due to a lot of factors such as war disaster and plague. Therefore, people should be more pay attention to the history, because it can give more knowledge about human and others subject.
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