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Describe a special meal that you remember having. v.1

Describe a special meal that you remember having. v. 1
Describe a special meal that you remember having. You should say: where you had the meal who you were with when you had it and explain why it was a special meal to you. Sample Answer: I had many meals and I took part in many celebrations and parties and among those, the meal I had with my teachers and classmates in my high school was a very important one and I still remember it. I had the meal at our school community centre. The meal was thrown as part of the farewell of our batch from the high school. The party was help in the evening and our teachers, classmates and some of the members of the school committee as well as our guardians were present. My father was present with me and he was sitting next to me in the meal. This was a special meal because this was the last meal I had with my classmates who had been my friend for more than 4 years. I was bit sad to admit to myself that I won’t see most of them in my life again and I was happy that I had such a good memory about my school, teachers and friends. There was a short speech by 2-3 of our teachers and by 2-3 guardians and after that, the meal was served. Many items were served in the feast and we all ate voraciously as we were hungry. I enjoyed the desert very much. I returned home at late night with my father and started feeling that I will never forget this event and the good meal I had with my teachers and friends whom I might not meet again.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe an outdoor meal you enjoyed.   Describe meal that you had with your friends.   Describe a meal or food item you know how to cook.   Describe a skill you have.   Describe a picnic you enjoyed.
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Describe
a special
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meal
that you remember having. You should say: where you had the
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meal
who you were with when you had it and
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explain
why it was a special
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meal
to you. Sample Answer:

I had
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many
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meals
and I
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took part
in
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many
celebrations and parties and among those, the
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meal
I had with my
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teachers
and classmates in my high
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school
was a
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very
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important
one and I
still
remember it.

I had the
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meal
at our
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school
community
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centre
. The
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meal
was thrown
as part of the farewell of our batch from the high
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school
. The party was
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help
in the evening and our
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teachers
, classmates and
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some of the
members of the
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school
committee as
well
as our guardians were present. My father was present with
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me and
he was sitting
next
to me in the meal.

This was a special
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meal
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because
this was the last
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meal
I had with my classmates who had been my friend for more than 4 years. I was
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bit
sad to admit to myself that I won’t
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see
most of them in my life
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again and
I was happy that I had such a
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good
memory about my
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school
,
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teachers
and friends.

There was a short speech by 2-3 of our
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teachers
and by 2-3 guardians and after that, the
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meal
was served
.
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Many
items
were served
in the
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feast and
we all ate
voraciously
as we were hungry. I enjoyed the desert
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very
much. I returned home at late night with my father and
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started
feeling that I will never forget this
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event
and the
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good
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meal
I had with my
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teachers
and friends whom I might not
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meet
again.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
an outdoor
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meal
you enjoyed.
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You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
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meal
that you had with your friends.
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Describe
a
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meal
or food item
you know
how to cook.
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Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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skill
you have.
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Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a picnic you enjoyed.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a special meal that you remember having. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
348 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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