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talk about a strange dream you see

talk about a strange dream you see Vwm6J
I go to bed to sleep. I very happy. I haven't been sad. because I am happy. I like dreams. because feel you the people are my servants. People often argue that having high income jobs is better, in my opinion I feel that satisfaction is better than high income salary. I disagree with having high income. Firstly, having job satisfaction is more important than high salary because people who often earn high income tend to have more stress and less time to be free but people who are satisfied with their jobs tend to be less stressed and not having to worry too much. For instance, a guy who works in arts and designing is often more happy and less stressed and that gives him a freedom of imagination. In other words, he tends to be less stressed and worried but more creative and satisfied.
I go to bed to sleep.
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I
haven't been sad.
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because
I am happy. I like dreams.
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feel you the
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people
are my servants.

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argue that
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income jobs is better, in my opinion I feel that satisfaction is better than
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income salary. I disagree with
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Firstly
,
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job satisfaction is more
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time to be free
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to worry too much.
For instance
, a guy who works in arts and designing is
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more happy and
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and that gives him
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a freedom
of imagination.
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, he tends to be
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IELTS speaking talk about a strange dream you see

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3 paragraphs
146 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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