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Talk about a stage/ part of your life that you enjoyed the most. v.1

Talk about a stage/ part of your life that you enjoyed the most. v. 1
Talk about a stage/ part of your life that you enjoyed the most. You should say: what part it is where you were then what memorable things you did and explain why this is the most enjoyable part / stage in your life. Sample Answer 1: Thank you very much for this nice cue  card topic. The best part of my life is undoubtedly the childhood I have had. In fact, childhood is favourite to everyone and my childhood was extraordinary, magical and full of excitements. I spent my childhood in a suburban area which is (. . . say the name of the place where you spent your childhood. . . ). This was a very beautiful place and I was lucky that I was born in this wonderful town. My parents always loved me and they had been my best companion in my childhood. Once in a year, they took me out of the country to enjoy our summer holidays. I was the centre of their universe and my childhood became so gorgeous due to them. My first visit to Greece with my parents was quite exciting and enthralling. This was the first time when I realised that people in other countries do not speak our language, they have a different eating habit and they dress differently! Apart from that, my first day at school, first ride on a bicycle, first train journey and my first pet- a dog actually- are all so vivid in my memory. I specifically remember the times I played different games and sports with my classmates and those days were heavenly. Finally, I loved reading books and my visit to our community library, that had a great collection of books, is also a memorable experience from my childhood. Why my childhood is the most enjoyable stage in my life? - Well, I guess this was the time my inquisitive mind enjoyed everything new I saw or heard about. Reading, going to the school, playing, going out with my parents, learning new things, travelling and so man activities I had in my childhood make it extraordinary. There was no tension, responsibility and I had been surrounded by my parents love. I could ask for anything and my parents were ready to fulfil my wishes. I was in a dream world where no pain or sorrow was usually allowed to enter. My parents were my protector and I was their prince! The family bonding was strong, people cared more about others, they had more time to socialise and life was not that much mechanical that we see these days. The love, surprises, innocence, inquisitive minds, unquenchable thrusts to learning, beautiful surroundings, and worry less life made my childhood even more enjoyable. It was magical and full of wonder.     Sample Answer 2: The life in university is the most enjoyable time. In fact, everyone wishes to go back in those days. This is the part that anyone makes a lot of mistakes and then enjoys the mistakes in later phage of life. I am really glad to discuss about the issue here. Student life is most important part of one’s life. But not all the phases are interesting as it is during the university stage. This is the time when a student may do whatever s/ he wants to do. Besides, there are none to impose any restriction. Actually, almost all the university students are adults and they have the liberty to do and participate in all the legal and logical things and facts. So, they can enjoy everything. Further, being adults, they can enjoy the tastes of life which is not possible in other parts of student life. Hence, I enjoyed this part of my life to the fullest extent.   I was an undergraduate student of University of Queensland in Australia. Admission in the university was really a hard issue for me. I had to take numerous preparations and also appeared in different tests to get the chance for admission here. Being a reputed university, I had to follow some of the rules and regulations. But I enjoyed them as well like I basked in the liberty that I never had before. I got admitted in Humanities and Social Science department. Hence, there were less chances for bunking classes or exams. But I did lots of fun with my classmates and friends. Moreover, the university campus was adorable and the classrooms were well decorated. So, whenever, I went at the university for attending classes or any other purposes, I felt a sense of joy inside. Memories never die. I have a huge number of memories at the university. First of all, I used to do fun in the class. So, all the teachers loved me for my fun-loving nature. Sometimes, I made questions that I know is impossible to answer. They actually were meant to puzzle the teacher and make some fun with everyone. Accordingly, I asked them to the teachers while they were unable to answer the questions in the right manner. However, I cannot remember all the events exactly as long days have been passed after I left the university. But I can remember the event clearly when a teacher of mine cited me as an example of a smart boy. He pointed the class that this is the boy who is wicked enough to cause irritation but on the other hand he is smart and never misses his studies. I was overwhelmed with this recognition. This is really an enjoyable part of life and I am explaining here. When people enter into their profession, they cannot manage time enough time to enjoy themselves. Socializing becomes a rare issue. Besides, life turns mechanized. In fact, people cannot do even if they want to do as they lack times for other activities. They may have some routine activities but those are not enough to develop a healthy mental faculty. But during the university stage, there are no such restrictions. A student can do any legal thing after his/ her will. They can undertake trips to different places, read extracurricular books, enjoy music, participate in sports, meet their hobbies and any other things. The chances get narrower in later phase. And before the university stage, they are disallowed from many interesting things with different excuses. Considering all the aspects, I believe this is the most enjoyable part of my life.
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part
of your
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life
that you
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enjoyed
the most. You should say: what
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part
it is where you were then what memorable things you did and
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explain
why this is the most
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enjoyable
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part
/
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stage
in your
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life
. Sample
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Answer
1:

Thank you
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very
much for this nice cue
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card topic. The best
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part
of my
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life
is
undoubtedly
the childhood I have had. In
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fact
, childhood is
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favourite
to everyone and my childhood was extraordinary, magical and full of excitements.

I spent my childhood in a suburban area which is (.
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say
the name of the place where you spent your childhood.
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)
. This was a
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very
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beautiful
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place and
I was lucky that I
was born
in this wonderful town. My
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parents
always
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loved
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me and
they had been my best companion in my childhood. Once in a year, they took me out of the country to
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enjoy
our summer holidays. I was the
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centre
of their universe and my childhood became
so
gorgeous due to them.

My
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first
visit to Greece with my
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parents
was quite exciting and enthralling. This was the
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first
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time
when I
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realised
that
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people
in
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other
countries do not speak our language, they have a
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different
eating
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habit and
they dress
differently
! Apart from that, my
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first
day at school,
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first
ride on a bicycle,
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first
train journey and my
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first
pet- a dog
actually
- are all
so
vivid in my memory. I
specifically
remember the
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times
I played
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different
games and sports with my classmates and those days were heavenly.
Finally
, I
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loved
reading books and my visit to our community library, that had a great collection of books, is
also
a memorable experience from my childhood.

Why my childhood is the most
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enjoyable
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stage
in my
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life
?
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-
Well
,
I guess
this was the
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time
my inquisitive mind
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enjoyed
everything new I
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saw
or heard about. Reading, going to the school, playing, going out with my
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parents
, learning new things, travelling and
so
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man
activities I had in my childhood
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make
it extraordinary. There was no tension, responsibility and I had
been surrounded
by my
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parents
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love
. I could
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ask for
anything and my
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parents
were ready to fulfil my wishes. I was in a dream world where no pain or sorrow was
usually
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allowed
to enter. My
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parents
were my
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protector and
I was their prince! The family bonding was strong,
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people
cared more about others, they had more
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time
to
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socialise
and
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life
was not that much mechanical that we
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see
these days. The
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love
, surprises, innocence, inquisitive minds, unquenchable thrusts to learning,
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beautiful
surroundings, and worry less
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life
made my childhood even more
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enjoyable
. It was magical and full of wonder.
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Sample
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Answer
2:

The
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life
in
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university
is the most
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enjoyable
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time
. In
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fact
, everyone wishes to go back in those days. This is the
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part
that anyone
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makes
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a lot of
mistakes and then
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enjoys
the mistakes in later phage of
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life
. I am
really
glad to
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discuss about the
issue here.
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Student
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life
is
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most
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important
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part
of one’s
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life
.
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But
not all the phases are interesting as it is during the
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university
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stage
. This is the
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time
when a
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student
may do whatever s/ he wants to do.
Besides
, there are none to impose any restriction.
Actually
, almost all the
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university
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students
are
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adults and
they have the liberty to do and participate in all the legal and logical things and facts.
So
, they can
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enjoy
everything.
Further
, being adults, they can
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enjoy
the tastes of
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life
which is not possible in
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other
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parts
of
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student
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life
.
Hence
, I
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enjoyed
this
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part
of my
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life
to the fullest extent.
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I was an undergraduate
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student
of
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University
of Queensland in Australia. Admission in the
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university
was
really
a
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hard
issue for me. I had to take numerous preparations and
also
appeared in
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different
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tests
to
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get
the chance for admission here. Being a reputed
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university
, I had to follow
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some of the
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rules
and regulations.
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But
I
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enjoyed
them as
well
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like
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before
. I
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got
admitted in Humanities and Social Science department.
Hence
, there were
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less
chances for bunking
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classes
or exams.
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But
I did lots of fun with my classmates and friends.
Moreover
, the
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university
campus was adorable and the classrooms were
well
decorated.
So
, whenever, I went at the
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university
for attending
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classes
or any
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other
purposes, I felt a sense of joy inside. Memories never
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die
. I have a huge number of memories at the
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university
.
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First of all
, I
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used
to do fun in the
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class
.
So
, all the
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teachers
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loved
me for my fun-loving nature.
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Sometimes
, I made questions that I know is impossible to
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answer
. They
actually
were meant
to puzzle the
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teacher
and
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make
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some
fun with everyone.
Accordingly
, I asked them to the
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teachers
while they were unable to
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answer
the questions in the
right
manner.
However
, I cannot remember all the
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events
exactly as long days have
been passed
after I
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left
the
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university
.
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But
I can remember the
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event
clearly
when a
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teacher
of mine cited me as an example of a smart boy. He pointed the
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class
that this is the boy who
is wicked
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enough
to cause irritation
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but
on the
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other
hand he is smart and never misses his studies. I
was overwhelmed
with this recognition. This is
really
an
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enjoyable
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part
of
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life and
I am explaining here. When
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people
enter into their profession, they cannot manage
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time
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enough
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time
to
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enjoy
themselves.
Do not mix variants of the same word ('socialize' and 'socialise') within a single text.
Socializing
becomes a rare issue.
Besides
,
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life
turns mechanized. In
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fact
,
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people
cannot do even if they want to do as they lack
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times
for
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other
activities. They may have
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some
routine activities
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but
those are not
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enough
to develop a healthy mental faculty.
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But
during the
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university
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stage
, there are no such restrictions. A
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student
can do any legal thing after his/ her will. They can undertake trips to
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different
places, read extracurricular books,
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enjoy
music, participate in sports,
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meet
their hobbies and any
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other
things. The chances
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get
narrower in later phase. And
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before
the
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university
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stage
, they
are disallowed
from
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many
interesting things with
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different
excuses. Considering all the aspects, I believe this is the most
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enjoyable
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part
of my
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life
.
24Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
115Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
27Mistakes

IELTS speaking Talk about a stage/ part of your life that you enjoyed the most. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
6 paragraphs
1068 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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