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Talk about a recent change in your life. v.1

Talk about a recent change in your life. v. 1
Talk about a recent change in your life. You should say: what was it what was the reason for this change was it a positive or negative change for you and explain what happened after this change. Model Answer: I have completed my graduation only a few months ago and within the three months of my departure from the university, I started working in a private company. My new job and my lifestyle changes due to that job is very recent and in my opinion pretty significant as well. Since I joined this company as a Business Executive, I had to make a shift from my student life to corporate life. That was the main reason for the changes I went through. Definitely, that was an important and positive change for my life. I had to join a company or organisation to start my career and I was very glad that I was appointed by a big and prestigious company of the country. I am no longer a student and I do not have to attend classes and prepare for exams. I am now responsible for the job position I have. Many things have changed including my sleeping pattern and dress-up. I now sleep early and wake up early which were pretty opposite during my student life. I have to maintain office time and follow up my job responsibilities that I was trusted with during my appointment. In fact, I am happy with the changes in my life. I have a great vision and big ambition about my career and now I feel that I am on the right track and I will have to work hard to achieve my future goal. All of those realisations came in my mind after I started working for this company. Besides, now I enjoy economic freedom and that’s a major change as well.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: 1. Describe a recent important event of your life. 2. Describe a change you would like to happen in your life. 3. Describe a hobby or activity you have started. 4. Describe something you have started recently.
Talk about a recent
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change
in your
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life
. You should say: what was it what was the reason for this
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change
was it a
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positive
or
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negative
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change
for you and
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explain
what happened after this
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change
. Model Answer:

I have completed my graduation
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only
a few months ago and within the three months of my departure from the university, I
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started
working in a private
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company
. My new
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job
and my lifestyle
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changes
due to that
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job
is
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very
recent and in my opinion pretty significant as
well
. Since I
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joined
this
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company
as a Business Executive, I had to
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make
a shift from my student
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life
to corporate
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life
. That was the main reason for the
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changes
I went through.

Definitely, that was an
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important
and
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positive
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change
for my
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life
. I had to
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join
a
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company
or
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organisation
to
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start
my
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career and
I was
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very
glad that I
was appointed
by a
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big
and prestigious
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company
of the country. I am no longer a student and I do not
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have to
attend classes and prepare for exams.
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I
am
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now
responsible for the
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job
position I have.
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Many
things have
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changed
including my sleeping pattern and dress-up. I
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now
sleep early and wake up early which were pretty opposite during my student
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life
. I
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have to
maintain office time and follow up my
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job
responsibilities that I
was trusted
with during my appointment. In fact, I am happy with the
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changes
in my
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life
. I have a great vision and
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big
ambition about my career and
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now
I feel that I am on the
right
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track
and I will
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have to
work
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hard
to achieve my future goal. All of those
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realisations
came in my mind after I
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started
working for this
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company
.
Besides
,
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now
I enjoy economic freedom and that’s a major
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change
as
well
.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
: 1.
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Describe
a recent
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important
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event
of your
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life. 2
.
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Describe
a
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change
you would like to happen in your
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life. 3
.
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Describe
a hobby or activity you have
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started. 4
.
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Describe
something you have
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started
recently.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS speaking Talk about a recent change in your life. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
6 paragraphs
372 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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