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Note that this is the original form of a two question essay that gets asked and it is essentially the same as the essay above and follows the same format. The question type is quite commonplace and you can use the template below for any essay of this type.

Note that this is the original form of a two question essay that gets asked and it is essentially the same as the essay above and follows the same format. The question type is quite commonplace and you can use the template below for any essay of this type. D25nk

……………. is becoming increasingly serious in many nations. Although ……………. Threaten[s] many societies, its /their effects can also be combated successfully. This essay looks at some of the problems caused by ……………. on society, and suggests some solutions to the problems. ……………. causes multiple problems. The ……………. effects are very obvious. For example, ……………. In some cases, such as ……………. even leads to (death). The second effect is ……………. People who ……………. become ……………. However, the menace of ……………. can be fought. Education is the main way to tackle this issue. People need to be aware of the effects so that they can avoid this problem. In addition, the government could also ……………. . This is a good approach because ……………. In conclusion, ……………. is a serious issue because it causes harmful effects on people’s health and people who are ……………. The best approaches to deal with it are to educate people about its damaging effects, and also for the government to ……………. . Although the problem is unlikely to be entirely eliminated in the short term there are concrete steps to reduce the effects it is having on the current society.

……………. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIs
is
 becoming increasingly
 serious in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 nations. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
 ……………. Threaten[s] This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 societies, its /their effects can also
be combated
successfully
. This essay looks at If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
 caused by ……………. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
on
 society, and suggests This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 solutions to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems.

……………
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCauses
causes
 multiple You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
. The ……………. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterEffects
effects
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 obvious. For example
, ……………. In This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 cases, such as ……………. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterEven
even
 leads to (death). The second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentreactioneventrepercussionside effectramification
effect
 is ……………. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 who ……………. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBecome
become
 …………….

However
, the menace of ……………. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCan
can
be fought
. Education is the main way to tackle this issue. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 need to be aware of the effects so
 that they can avoid this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
. In addition
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 could also
 ……………. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 This is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 approach This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 …………….

In conclusion
, ……………. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIs
is
 a serious issue This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it causes harmful effects on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people’s
 health and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who are ……………. The best approaches to deal with it are to educate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 about its damaging effects, and also
 for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 to ……………. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 is unlikely to be entirely
 eliminated in the short term there are concrete steps to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the effects it is having on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 society. 