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Some people believe that- today- a college degree holds little value in the job market; so learning a trade would be a more practical path. Other people, however, still think that a four-year diploma opens doors and justifies going into potentially massive debts, seeing it as an investment in one's future career and earnings. State your opinion and explain your argument.

Some people believe that- today- a college degree holds little value in the job market; so learning a trade would be a more practical path. Other people, however, still think that a four-year diploma opens doors and justifies going into potentially massive debts, seeing it as an investment in one's future career and earnings. State your opinion and explain your argument. j8Dw8
College is the shortest path to becoming an engineer, doctor, or bachelor. Just hearing the name makes them feel great, and that's not to mention when they have a university degree in hand, sooner or later they will find a stable job to create a stable life for themselves. But whether that road is full of silk, only those who have been and are going through it can understand. “College is not the only path. ” But entering university will give us a horizon to learn new knowledge. University will open up for us a vast horizon of learning, learning more, learning forever. At the University, where there are good lecturers, professors, and talented people, it is called "the principle of the nation". Those preeminent teachers and intellectuals will be the best guides, meaning as magical keys to help youth open directly to the door of the castle of science, technology, and wisdom. Our people are a nation with a tradition of studiousness, rich in intellectual aspirations. It is necessary to consider entering the University as a beautiful and luxurious career path, worthy of a good dream of many students. Must put all the time and energy to be able to get good results in this university exam In fact, there are many successful people who did not go to college. College is just a stepping stone for us to go up the ladder of success in life. But because of such a concept, many young people have done all kinds of things, studied everywhere to find a way to get a foot in the university lecture hall. Walking around social networks during exam preparation seasons, you can easily come across desperate laments: "There's too much homework, you have to work hard, try hard. . " or "How to get into university learn. . ? ". For those of you with fairly good academic standing, perhaps getting into a university is not difficult, but for the average student, it is indeed a dilemma. However, even though they knew that they could not afford to go to university, they still chose this path with their eyes closed. Because, they are not brave enough to take another path, the university is inherently the path most of you choose after graduating from high school. Besides, trade would be a more practical path. Brings about practical professional knowledge. The advantage that must be mentioned before the name of the apprenticeship program is the practical professional skills because the knowledge learned is mainly put into practice. Job opportunities are high, vocational training institutions now always understand the needs of the labor market, thereby connecting with businesses, giving students useful practical knowledge and opportunities. big job. Parents are always worried that their children will not find a stable job with a high salary after finishing school, because in them there is always a notion that a higher degree will earn a higher salary and vice versa. Indeed, because society believes that "university is first", many young people have a disdainful view of degrees lower than university such as high school, college, vocational training. But do you know, the value of success is what we achieve, not what we learn? Whether you go to university, college, professional high school, or even study nothing after 12 years of high school, as long as you have the spirit of learning, the will to progress, and the determination to do together, you will be successful. Going to university is by no means the only path. The world has seen many successful people without a university degree. They can still be successful by following different paths, as long as they have passion, effort, and give their best efforts. There are many famous people in the world who don't need to go to college but still have admirable success, such as Bill Gates. Or scientists and inventors like Edison, Abstain. The path to life, to today's happy horizon of youth, has also opened many doors. Maybe the doors of college won't open to you, but other doors won't close to you. Through each exam season, there are many students who are disappointed because they cannot enter university, even many of them have negative thoughts that lead to jobs that ruin their future. You see college as a great road, but if you don't step into it, you will feel ashamed and bad, feel inferior to your friends. Today, it is a fact that many people finish university but keep their diplomas in the closet and go to work to earn a living. If you don't make smart choices, college will ruin your future. Therefore, it is not as important to go to university or not as before. Many students finish high school and choose to go to vocational training or to work abroad. If the family situation is still difficult and the current academic level is still limited, then temporarily put aside the distant dream of going to university, but let's make the dream closer and more realistic. Do jobs that are suitable for your ability, useful for your family and society. Think of life as a university, life is a school with a lot of new things. College is not the only path. But there is an important point that, whether you go to college or not, the path to success is impossible without learning.
College is the shortest
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path
to becoming an engineer, doctor, or bachelor.
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Just
hearing the name
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makes
them feel great, and that's not to mention when they have a
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university
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degree
in hand, sooner or later they will find a stable
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job
to create a stable
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life
for themselves.
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But
whether that road is full of silk,
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only
those
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have been and are going through it can understand.

“College is not the
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only
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path
. ”
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entering
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will give us a horizon to learn new
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knowledge
.
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will open up for us a vast horizon of
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,
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more,
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forever. At the
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, where there are
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lecturers, professors, and talented
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, it
is called
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the principle of the nation
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. Those preeminent teachers and intellectuals will be the best guides, meaning as magical keys to
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help
youth open
directly
to the
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door
of the castle of science, technology, and wisdom. Our
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people
are a nation with a tradition of studiousness, rich in intellectual aspirations. It is necessary to consider entering the
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University
as a
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beautiful
and luxurious career
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, worthy of a
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dream of
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students
.
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put all the time and energy to be able to
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results in this
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successful
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a stepping stone for us to go up the ladder of
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in
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.
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of such a concept,
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young
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have done all kinds of things, studied everywhere to find a way to
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a foot in the
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university
lecture hall. Walking around social networks during exam preparation seasons, you can
easily
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come
across desperate laments:
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"
There's too much homework, you
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have to
work
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hard
, try
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.
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How to
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learn.
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. For those of you with
fairly
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academic standing, perhaps getting into a
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is not difficult,
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but
for the average
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, it is
indeed
a dilemma.
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,
even though
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university
, they
still
chose this
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with their eyes closed.
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enough
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, the
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is
inherently
the
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most of you choose after graduating from
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school.

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, trade would be a more
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. Brings about
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professional
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. The advantage that
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the name of the apprenticeship program is the
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practical
professional
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skills
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because
the
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learned is
mainly
put into practice.
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opportunities are
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, vocational training institutions
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now
always understand the needs of the labor market, thereby connecting with businesses, giving
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students
useful
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knowledge
and opportunities.
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big
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. Parents are always worried that their children will not find a stable
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with a
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salary after finishing
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,
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in them there is always a notion that a higher
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will earn a higher salary and vice versa.

Indeed
,
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society believes that
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university is
first
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,
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young
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lower than
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such as
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school
, college, vocational training.
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do
you know
, the value of
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success
is what we achieve, not what we learn? Whether you go to
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university
, college, professional
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high
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school
, or even study nothing after 12 years of
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high
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school
, as long as you have the spirit of
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learning
, the will to progress, and the determination to do together, you will be successful.

Going to
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university
is by no means the
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. The world has
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seen
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successful
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degree
. They can
still
be successful by following
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, as long as they have passion, effort, and give their best efforts. There are
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many
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in the world
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still
have admirable
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success
, such as Bill Gates. Or scientists and inventors like Edison, Abstain. The
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path
to
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life
, to
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today
's happy horizon of youth, has
also
opened
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. Maybe the
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doors
of college won't open to you,
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but
other
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won't close to you.

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many
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students
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who
are disappointed
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because
they cannot enter
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, even
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many
of them have
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negative
thoughts that lead to
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jobs
that ruin their future. You
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see
college as a great road,
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but
if you don't step into it, you will feel ashamed and
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, feel inferior to your friends.
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, it is a fact that
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finish
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but
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keep
their diplomas in the closet and go to work to earn a living. If you don't
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make
smart choices, college will ruin your future.
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, it is not as
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important
to go to
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university
or not as
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.
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students
finish
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and choose to go to vocational training or to work abroad.

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still
difficult and the
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current
academic level is
still
limited, then
temporarily
put aside the distant dream of going to
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,
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let
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of
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,
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is a
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school
with
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a lot of
new things. College is not the
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.
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there is an
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important
point that, whether you go to college or not, the
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to
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is impossible without
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learning
.
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IELTS speaking Some people believe that- today- a college degree holds little value in the job market; so learning a trade would be a more practical path. Other people, however, still think that a four-year diploma opens doors and justifies going into potentially massive debts, seeing it as an investment in one's future career and earnings. State your opinion and explain your argument.

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